Sunday, October 11, 2009

Help Ryan Edit His Story.

Ryan’s Weekend
Do you no Ryan did last weekend. He went to the beach with his family.
First, Ryan builded a huge sand castle. Then, he collect seashells and
rocks After that, he goed swimming with his brother. Ryan has a
wonderful time at the beach.

Ryan's story has lots of mistakes in it...read it carefully and correct the errors.
You will need to write out the whole story again as a comment.

2 comments:

Beth said...

Do you no what Ryan did blast weekend. He wentto the beach with his family. first Ryan built a huge sand castle ,then he collected some sea shells and rocks.After that he went for a swim with his brother. Ryan had a wonderful time at the beach.

Jennifer said...

Do you know what Ryan did last weekend? He went to the beach with his family. First, Ryan built a huge sand castle. Then, he collected seashells and rocks. After that, he went swimming with his brother. Ryan had a wonderful time at the beach.